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Oct 26, 2015
Yes it was a fanfic of Twilight because all it added was bondage to the mix. Yes the writing is poor quality, but why read it if you going to hate on it, unless you like poorly written literature? I like the book because yes there are some people who don't have a personality even at the age Ana is at because they don't know who they are as person also someone woman who experience sex for the first time don't have anything to relate their first time with so give the book a break if you going to criticize at least know where the author is coming from, which mind you, is a teenager or a young adult book and this how we think it's not for the potential of full grown adult who has the maturity or elegance of 30 or 40 or hell even a 50 year old most people might find it appalling but that's just how it is. And yes I do agree with the multiples of "oh mys and my inner goddess is," was used too much, but to the author's credit she knew she was writing something that would A. sell and B. piss of people and C. make money off the stupidity of teenaged girls and others alike it's because mostly this is what is selling in our society today.